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Open Poetry #12

My last hurrah

poertyman2002
Junior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 32
Florida, US

0 posted 2001-03-03 06:41 PM

My last hurrah.

I lived for all eternity,
Among the houses, yes.
I ran along the riverside and,
Ate berries off the trees.
My friends stood at my side each day.
And to my surprise they would say.
Hurrah my friend hurrah my friend.
They came to say hurrah.
But then one day I'd look and say,
Goodbye my friend,
Good BYE.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2001-03-03 07:28 PM

Sounds as though saying good bye was hard for you .......good writing

SEA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-03-04 02:43 AM

Say, what's up poetryman? Is this a plea between the lines?

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

3 posted 2001-03-04 02:47 AM

i liked it yes cant say much but that it made me feel well. good meetin yuh

EagleScorpion
Senior Member

since 2000-03-08

Posts 1644
Here, Now, Forever

4 posted 2001-03-04 02:57 AM

Not bad.. I liked it. Are you trying to depict two immortal beings living among us in love? Thats pretty cool.

Love is God. Love is war. Love is what your life is for.

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2001-03-04 03:28 AM

Well, hullo, hurrah and goodbye. Well written piece.
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

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