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Open Poetry #12

Good Morning Red....

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

0 posted 2001-03-03 08:19 AM

Good Morning Red…

across the frozen white
the chirp of you, skimming, comes
faster than if over
the first green of spring frond

tell-tale marks of late night foragers
seen in the crystalline
and only guessed at
in the spring of green

still the chill nip in the air
though by your song you are there
baring your red, a banner of bright
beckoning call of spring's warm light

and in the trill of thrilling first call
you shall banish winter soon for all

write with grace, all others lose face;
"Jo was very tall, thin, ... and reminded one of a colt..." LMA

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

1 posted 2001-03-03 08:44 AM

Lady love, this is exquisite work it really and truly is an utter delight to read. So beautiful with it's breath of spring. I love it, as always, you have an abundance of talent.
Wonderful work
Take care love as always
Puck

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Agust P
Member

since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

2 posted 2001-03-04 06:48 AM

I enjoyed this one, beautiful! AP

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