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Titanic |
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poertyman2002 Junior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 32Florida, US |
Well, someone requested that I write more so here I go: Like a car when it crashes, Like a heart being broken, Like a plane turning into ashes, Like losing an important token. Like bread that is sliced, Like a salad being tossed, Like a paper wihtout ink, Is the Titanic being lost. Like a stomach without food, Like a stapler without staples, Like a horse without a dude, Like a televeision wihtout cables. Like a pencil without lead, Like a tootsie roll with a big cost, Like a room wihtout a bed, Is the Titanic being lost. Poetry from the heart- 8th grade, now in 11th |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"Like a tootsie roll with a big cost".... hehe... i LOVE that line... you say you wrote this when you were in 8th grade? applause!!!! very nice indeed.... yes, keep writing and keep posting (by the way, though, you probably don't know, but these forums move really fast and though there are no strict rules, per se, most try to post only a few a day.... you write quite well!  good to see you here ) |
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poertyman2002 Junior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 32Florida, US |
Only a few a day? u mean so i dont run out? I wont run out of poetry- for life i s poetry |
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