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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Feelings What would happen if a guy wanted to fall in love and no one fell in love with him? How long could he carry on solo before his journey came to an end? I call it letting my feelings go back to the place where feelings begin. They don't want to go back. They desire to give. To express themselves. Take time to live. Funny things happen when you begin to take your feelings back again. First you need a crowbar to pry your fingers loose. Those claws are dug in so darn tight you have to pry them loose with all your might. Time flies by and you let go just to prove you can. Then you panic for awhile and grab hold again. Well what do you know finally after a while you find you can let go and still wear a smile. Please notice I'm not really trying to give anyone a hard time. I'm only trying to let go of something that was never mine. I'm tryin to bring my feelings back. My feelings were reaching out to you and suddenly there was no one to reach out to. Jameslee@March03,2001 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Been there and it is no fun. Nothing wrong with not wanting to let go when you know where you belong, the only question is how long can you survive while waiting for the right cards to be dealt. Great write from you and lends itself to a lot of speculation as to whether I have ever let go myself or merely talked myself into believing I did. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read  |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent write from you sweet James........hugs, SEAIf I let you into my heart..... will you promise to stay? ~Sue~ |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
James, Good thoughts, good words, good write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
"I'm only trying to let go of something that was never mine." And that can be unbelievably difficult. *S* You've written well of a situation so many of us have faced/are facing/will face. *S* |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Ah sweetie...letting go is hard AND scary...but sometimes you just gotta...hugs |
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