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VAS
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0 posted 2001-03-03 11:31 AM



The Rhyme of the Ancient Terrier
Virginia Salter

Brown sugar brown was he
mottled well with black
trotted, skittered ‘round the field
then he headed back

Barked, "Hello," and shook his paw
sang howls to the moon
put a bone in the deep deep ground
and dug it up too soon

Wore a collar ‘round his neck
attached to silver leash
loping forth for all he’s worth
though master begged he cease

In spite his age, for it is long
he clamored for first place
his ears would flop and flip around
yet his feet would move with grace

Yes, there’s no dog quite like him
and surely none the merrier
than this loving, frolicking
jolly ancient terrier

© July 3, 2000

© Copyright 2001 Virginia Salter - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2001-03-03 12:15 PM


VAS,
this is so cool, And I'm sure the ancient mariner would forgive you.

Write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



Denise
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2 posted 2001-03-03 12:25 PM


This is so cute, Virginia!
suthern
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3 posted 2001-03-04 05:28 PM


Water, water everywhere
And all the boards did shrink
Water, water everywhere
Nor any drop to drink!

Yanno... I'm quite sure there are things I could have learned in high school that would have served me better than memorizing LONG poems... especially since my mind has long since flushed most of my efforts! LOL

I enjoyed the read, VAS... (even if I will be cursing you for all these verses that you invited to visit! LOL)

VAS
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4 posted 2001-03-04 06:35 PM


Thanks all. Uh, suthern, cursing me????Why???
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