Open Poetry #12 |
Know This ! |
Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Know This ! ~*Marge Tindal*~ He never did anything bad to anybody Never intentionally hurt a soul Oh, he gave a shove - took a shove but always took more of it than he gave Then you, you son of a fuddrucker fired a gun through the window of his van and blew him away ~ Sometimes - most times it's something you read about in the newspaper Happens to a stranger whose name you don't remember the day after tomorrow But sometimes - oh god, sometimes it lands right in the front yard of your heart The sirens aren't down the street the television cameras aren't in San Diego It happens in your friendship circle And when the bullets explode - the fragments cut into your heart So where is the remote to change the channel then ? ~ Wherever you are, you son of a fuddrucker forget that he was to marry the next day forget that his bride-to-be now wears shades of somber forget that he left four children in sorrow forget that you took his life But ... don't ever forget that for the rest of mine I pray that you will have to run for the rest of yours ~ as a matter of fact - I can guarantee it ~ *In loving memory of Dr. Kent A. DeLong February 2001 [This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Is that a matter of fact... lots of tears... nice message Sis. dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
let the writing help heal your heart ... let the anger keep you strong but not own you let the memories hold your heart ... and yes ... in the end ... they WILL have to stand before a higher court ... my thoughts and prayers to all in the loss. hugs to you dear poet. powerful writing...truth in your words. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Marge, I did not know.... |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, Firstly what can I do to help, secondly what can I do to help you. As always you have writen your heart, and if I can't offer anything else know that my heart is with you. ((((HUGS)))) love you dear heart And I do mean if I can help call me Wonderfully writen piece love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very painful to read this morning, I hope you are ok.......hugs and love to you sweet Marge....SEA |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
YOU BET HE WILL!!!!!!!!!!!! I am so glad that you decided to get this out of your system my sweet friend. It is about time you let some of it go. I know that the pain is still very much there and nothing can take that away right now but we also know that certain "SEEN" knowledge will find a way to bring it all to the light of day. Love and hugs to you my dear friend. YKIAHFY |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
really painful words .. WRITTEN BY ME..(17 YRS HIGHSCHOOL GIRL) EASY ON ME.. I'M JUST AN AMATEUR |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
God! that's so terrible Marge! The words of truth are pouring out of your heart here Marge. When it hits close to home then the tradgedy of it all becomes so very large and real. I feel the depth of your painful anger and want you to know that I agree with every word! Love to you!! ethome |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
That such a tragedy has touched you saddens me, Marge. I'm so sorry. My sympathies to all. |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge, So sorry this man lost his life. This struck very close to home for me. My father was murdered by some nameless face, for a few one dollar bills. Tradgedy that is so pointless cuts to the core. I feel your pain, and understand the loss. Prayers for the family, for you, and all who are suffering. Hugs, Debra |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sweet lady know that you are in my heart and in my prayers and that if it were in my power that fuddrucker would be standing before you right now...God knows Marge...He knows and while that doesnt ease the pain in your heart...his day will come when he has to face this judge of all judges... |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Strong words Marge...I believe that Justice comes to those that deserve it...you can run but you can't hide...James |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
I am so sorry for this loss....be well and peace marge..... *** Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
This piece practically moved me to tears, Marge...I'm so sorry to hear about your loss. And, yes, he will eventually pay for his actions. And, I hope you know we're all here for you, m'friend...take care! sp do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I know what you mean. It can and does happen close to home. A friend of my son's was murdered the other day. The sad part is, is that many people are affected by one lousy "fuddrucker's" actions. Melton |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge my friend, I am so glad that you have put your feelings into words here, and have shared them with so many who love you and care. My heart felt love and respect go to you now, as always. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
The pain and strength in this one are astounding... and my heart hurts for your grief. Well written! |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
so much sadness in the hurt and pain.. Sorry to all who have ever had to endure that burden.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-I am sorry. My brother is a police officer and he has seen more than his share. I feel your pain and Gods speed to you. Hold on to special memories and may time ease your pain. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Taking a moment to thank each of you for your tender, thoughtful responses. Please keep my sister, Lori, in your prayers, as Kent was her fiancé and her life has been turned upside down by this horrible crime. Special hugs to Martie, Mark, Marsha and Michael, and you each know why. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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