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in the window. . . |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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in the window of my heart there is a c a n d l e just for you f l i c k e r i n g with love --------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-02-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
how soft.... |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
so softly beautiful Sven, well done. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah yes, the candle flickers in ever enduring hope.. Wonderful. Sandra |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
and may that light never fade....filling you with love and light even in the darkest night.... Beautiful~ "I wish the real world would just stop Hasseling me!" Real World MB20 |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
*tears in my eyes* When you can bring the reader to their deepest of emotions withing so few words, you're a writer. I can only say I am in awe. *gentle smile* "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, this is exquisite, so truly beautiful, Absolutely Fabulous  This is perfectly lovely, just like a dream, soft and tender. Yes I love it, because it's wonderful and sooooo you. Utterly terrific love Take care love as always Bubbles  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
How romantic! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Ahh, this is beautiful Swen....take care! Nathan |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Soft peaceful and loving scene Sven! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sunshine, thank you. . . it's how I am these days. . . GS, thank you. . .  SEA, I'll take that SIGH as a compliment!! Thank you. . . Sandra, I don't think that it will ever go out. . . thank you my friend. . . BDC, thank you. . . it will indeed always shine. . . dreamkeeper, it is you who has moved me today. . . that I brought you to such emotion is indeed quite humbling. . . thank you so much for sharing and for reading. . . Bubbles, so me, eh?? Well my friend, you know that I always try to be me love. . . thank you. . . walker, thank you!!! Nate, thanks!! You take care too!!! ethome, thank you my friend. . . it's a quiet scene indeed. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. [This message has been edited by Sven (edited 03-03-2001).] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, I love it when the responses are longer than the poem. So much power in so few words. Write on Kethry (sister moon) Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, And where may I find this window? Beautiful as always.... Love, Elise |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Sven, I hope I may some day be able to say so much in so few words. Lovely. Hugs, ME |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
indeed burning softly as these words do to each that read....  *** Greeneyes~ "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Sister Moon, it's always wonderful to see so much gleaned from so little. . . but that's the point. . . thank you. . . Elise, just look inside. . . it's there. . . thank you. . . ME, I know that you will my friend. . . I know that you will. . . thank you. . . Greeneyes, I'm glad that they warmed you as well. . . thank you. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Sven...James |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - what a beautiful write my friend. Just beautiful. BC |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
That's what I like about you. You keep a light on just in case. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
simply great... ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Sven, tender, nice, lovely thoughts. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
*melts* :supergrins: This seems to be you, and I love it! |
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Red-uni Member
since 2000-07-30
Posts 192Georgia, USA |
Nicely done,,as others stated. A lot said in few words. Red |
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