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Open Poetry #12

If only in a lie

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-03-02 08:49 PM

Touch my hands,
my sweet friend.
Kiss me gently,
but very deep.
Make me forget,
his lonely kisses.
Bare my soul,
with your body.
Let's not stop,
what we've began.
Stripped me naked,
of his passion.
Let's pretend to love.
Make me beg,
for your warmth.
Take the coldness
of his love.
Beg my heart,
to forget him, if only
for a day.
And if I called out
his name, please pretend
you didn't hear it.
Erase his senses,
from my pain.
In return,
I'll surrender to you for
tonight, if only in a lie.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-02 08:50 PM

how sad....

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

2 posted 2001-03-02 08:59 PM

wow, so intense, so sad......so well written. *s*

Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s*

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-03-02 09:08 PM

The lengths we go to, just to forget. The pain we endure, just to put it in words. This was much appreciated.

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-02 11:25 PM

the ache in this is felt deep........

SEA

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

5 posted 2001-03-02 11:58 PM

very nice, emotional read. Thanks walker.

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

6 posted 2001-03-04 05:05 PM

Beg my heart,
to forget him, if only
for a day.

Walker this poem is a tear jerker.
You have made me feel your heartbreak.

Dennis
Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 235
Indiana

7 posted 2001-03-04 05:34 PM

Take me take me! Just teasing a little, I can learn to lie down, I mean lie,
ok, I'm sorry, this is a great poem.......where do you live?
Don't pay me no mind, just that I often dream of chucking it all for something like this!!!!!!!!

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