Open Poetry #12 |
A Silce of Moonbeam Pie |
Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
*~*A Slice of Moonbeam Pie*~* Misty dreams of solace Found in the starry sky of night Carrying cares away On a crisp winter breeze. Carry me to where the angels fly And let the yellow kiss away my fears. Illuminate the corners of my mind And brighten my sense To twinkle all my tastebuds With a slice of moonbeam pie. A fulfilling emptiness in my heart As an eractic peace caresses the Earth. A tale told beyond the stars Is heard every night As a whisper in the child's ear So secretly heard by all. Illuminate the corners of your mind And open up your soul, Taste the bitter sweetness Of a slice of moonbeam pie. ~Becky~ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Becky, MMMMMMMM! I'll have a slice of that, even with the bitter aftertaste. Write on Kethry. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Illuminate the corners of my mind And brighten my sense To twinkle all my tastebuds With a slice of moonbeam pie." I love it! Beautiful write.. Poeminister |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Thank you very muchly Kethry and Poeminster, for reading, and above all, for commenting. You're very kind ~Becky~ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
with the whipped cream of starlight?? wonderful becky. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Sven - *Laughing* I like that! Whipped cream of starlight. Hehe, dangit! Why couldn't you have said so before i posted? I'm sure I could've written that in there somewhere! Now I feel my poem's lacking cream! Dang! Oh well, done now. Thanks for making me chuckle Sven....and for the kind comment ~Becky~ |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
~Becky~ Now this is precious, wonderfully expressed, I'll have another slice of pie. Hey Sven wanna share the whip cream?! Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
Melissa - wow, you're too kind. Got me all a-blushing here now. Thank you so very much for your kind words. The moon is yours tonight...take as many slices as you can handle. Many hugs to you, ~Becky~ |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wow, beats the heck out of rasberry pie, which is all I have This is fantasticly delicious, and I adore the title. Sandra |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
The feel of this verse on the tongue is as exquisite as would be moonbeam pie. the phrase "fulfilling emptiness" is totally captivating! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
~*~ BeckaLini I'll take a piece o' that Moonbeam Pie Slice it thick and sweet It's just a perfect snack What a splendid treat Moonbeam Pie served at midnight Yummy in my tummy ~*~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Beckalini Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 151Yorkshire, England |
catalinamoon - fantasticly delicious? Golly, you people like to make me blush don'tcha? Thank you soooo much for your kind words VAS - with the phrase 'fulfilling emptiness' I was trying to capture the overwhelming calm I feel when sitting under a midnight sky....did it work? Anyway, thank you muchly for your words of encouragement, they mean a lot Marge - I do so love how you presented your response. I found myself caught unawares and grinning. Thanks for that and for posting a reply. In Passions you're a legend to me, and for you to reply to one of my poems makes me feel worthy! lol Much love and hugs to you all, ~Becky~ |
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