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Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

0 posted 2001-01-14 02:32 PM

*~*A Slice of Moonbeam Pie*~*

Misty dreams of solace
Found in the starry sky of night
Carrying cares away
On a crisp winter breeze.
Carry me to where the angels fly
And let the yellow kiss away my fears.
Illuminate the corners of my mind
And brighten my sense
To twinkle all my tastebuds
With a slice of moonbeam pie.

A fulfilling emptiness in my heart
As an eractic peace caresses the Earth.
A tale told beyond the stars
Is heard every night
As a whisper in the child's ear
So secretly heard by all.
Illuminate the corners of your mind
And open up your soul,
Taste the bitter sweetness
Of a slice of moonbeam pie.

~Becky~

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2001-01-14 02:38 PM

Becky,
MMMMMMMM! I'll have a slice of that, even with the bitter aftertaste.
Write on
Kethry.

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-01-14 02:42 PM

"Illuminate the corners of my mind
And brighten my sense
To twinkle all my tastebuds
With a slice of moonbeam pie."

I love it! Beautiful write..

Poeminister

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

3 posted 2001-01-14 03:05 PM

Thank you very muchly Kethry and Poeminster, for reading, and above all, for commenting. You're very kind

~Becky~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-01-14 04:55 PM

with the whipped cream of starlight??

wonderful becky. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

5 posted 2001-01-14 06:38 PM

Sven - *Laughing* I like that! Whipped cream of starlight. Hehe, dangit! Why couldn't you have said so before i posted? I'm sure I could've written that in there somewhere! Now I feel my poem's lacking cream! Dang! Oh well, done now. Thanks for making me chuckle Sven....and for the kind comment

~Becky~

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

6 posted 2001-01-14 07:57 PM

~Becky~

Now this is precious, wonderfully expressed, I'll have another slice of pie. Hey Sven wanna share the whip cream?!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

7 posted 2001-01-14 08:05 PM

Melissa - wow, you're too kind. Got me all a-blushing here now. Thank you so very much for your kind words. The moon is yours tonight...take as many slices as you can handle.

Many hugs to you,
~Becky~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

8 posted 2001-01-14 08:25 PM

Wow, beats the heck out of rasberry pie, which is all I have

This is fantasticly delicious, and I adore the title.
Sandra

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

9 posted 2001-01-14 08:26 PM

The feel of this verse on the tongue is as exquisite as would be moonbeam pie.

the phrase "fulfilling emptiness" is totally captivating!

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

10 posted 2001-01-14 08:45 PM

~*~
BeckaLini
I'll take a piece
o' that Moonbeam Pie
Slice it thick and sweet
It's just a perfect snack
What a splendid treat
Moonbeam Pie served
at midnight Yummy
in my tummy
~*~

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Beckalini
Member

since 2001-01-02

Posts 151
Yorkshire, England

11 posted 2001-01-14 09:52 PM

catalinamoon - fantasticly delicious? Golly, you people like to make me blush don'tcha? Thank you soooo much for your kind words

VAS - with the phrase 'fulfilling emptiness' I was trying to capture the overwhelming calm I feel when sitting under a midnight sky....did it work? Anyway, thank you muchly for your words of encouragement, they mean a lot

Marge - I do so love how you presented your response. I found myself caught unawares and grinning. Thanks for that and for posting a reply. In Passions you're a legend to me, and for you to reply to one of my poems makes me feel worthy! lol

Much love and hugs to you all,
~Becky~

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