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Disgruntled
Junior Member

since 2001-03-01

Posts 13

0 posted 2001-03-02 08:09 PM

Looking into your eyes,
I feel it rising,
My heart in my throat,
Its not surprising,
This feeling has come,
So many times,
I seek to express it,
With these feeble rhymes,
Should I tell you my feelings,
Take the big leap,
Or maybe I should wait,
For the coming week,
Torn in two,
Will I disclose them,
I hesitate on the brink,
Fearing we won't make the link,
I'm afraid of rejection,
Of losing what that which I have,
I would make you my goddess,
But I'm afraid you would laugh,
I stand before you now,
My mind is set,
Your rosebud lips,
Have made me your pet,
Do what you will,
Laugh if you may,
But I swear to you now,
I'll never regret this day.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-03-02 09:22 PM

This is so romantic and sweet...but you said the 'never' word. AARRGGHHH! I hope your stars never dim, you write beatifully of the beginnings of love.

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-03-02 09:30 PM

Rent apart
inside out

How could this not speak
to many

Well said

AT

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2001-03-02 10:07 PM

oh yes, do make her your goddess......

that is so perfect! Enjoyed this very much

SEA

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

4 posted 2001-03-02 10:26 PM

No better time than the present to let one know how you feel. I say GO FOR IT!

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I know not what the future holds,
but I know Who holds the future.

I don't question YOUR existance - GOD

Disgruntled
Junior Member

since 2001-03-01

Posts 13

5 posted 2001-03-02 11:28 PM

I would just like to thank everybody who replied or even just read the few poems ive posted. I must say that I am very impressed by the material ive found posted on this site and admit that mine seem like theyve been written by a child in comparison. I just wanted to say that even though i dont reply to any of the posts it is not out of disrespect or for not liking it, it is because I wouldnt have enough time to write all of the praise that i would feel compelled to inscribe. thank you and i enjoy and am in awe of everybodies work here

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