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Open Poetry #12

I Loved You

inyourdreams
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 10
paradise

0 posted 2001-03-02 10:17 AM

I loved you in the morning
When the sun rose o'er the lake.
I loved you in the afternoon;
Our love was no mistake.
I loved you in the evening
When we watched the sunlight set.
I loved you in the dark of night,
Your kiss I won't forget.
I loved you sleeping silently
Held in your arms so tight,
And when the sun came up again,
Through afternoon delight.
Each day goes by, sunrise, sunset,
While I am loving you.
I loved you then, I love you now,
Don't doubt my love is true.

And as tomorrows come and go,
My love, I'll love you sweet.
I loved you then, and more again
Until my life's complete.

March 2, 2001

*dream on, baby, dream on me*

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-03-02 10:52 AM

What a lovely way of expressing an eternal love. Somehow I do believe this one will find it's way to the heart of someone special if it hasn't already. Wonderful write.

gnosis
Junior Member

since 2000-05-14

Posts 12

2 posted 2001-03-02 04:17 PM

Hallmark.com

i think this speaks for itself

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2001-03-02 04:37 PM

Excellent expression of your devotion...James

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-02 05:16 PM

This is so romantic....definately Hallmark material!

SEA

inyourdreams
Junior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 10
paradise

5 posted 2001-03-03 08:30 AM

Thanks to everyone who read and responded. So, you think I should write for hallmark? That's such a nice thing to say!

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