Open Poetry #12 |
In the Moonlight, Shadows dancing (challenge) |
Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
In the moonlight, shadows dancing against the tavern wall, and caper in the alleyway amid the brutal brawl. Each swing and dip embellished, as the fighters swagger on, one leads, the other follows, and deadly guns are drawn. Keeping time with fatal screams, the shadows bend and sway, to end the waltz on bloody ground when night fades into day. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Wonderfully done..sounds like the shootout at OK Corral.... |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
You've met the challenge well The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Nice twist to the dancing shadows. Good job. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
definately a neat one for the challenge......I liked this a lot! SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Challenge met very well. Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Romy Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170Plantation, Florida |
Thanks to all of you who replied! I searched for this challenge line and read everybody's version. I cannot begin to compete with the quality that I found! They were lovely! Debbie |
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