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This Too Shall Pass
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This Too Shall Pass |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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This Too Shall Pass ~*Marge Tindal*~ Sometimes upon a mountain of strength comes a menacing shadow that lays across the shoulder of the boulder Drapes sorrow in muted shades of gray that does not go away with just the peeking streaking of the sun A dormant haze clinging to the landscape of life bringing intimate strife that is not easily sloughed off Scoff ! ... this too shall pass ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, free verse that has more in its composition than any structured verse I ever penned. I love the imagery in this write. It is Black Velvet! write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
thank YOU!!!you have just described what i'm hoping will soon pass .... i appreciate this more than you know this morning. it was exactly the words i needed to hear. i hope you're right |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Marge what great expression...don't you often wonder how a shadow can be so heavy...you continue to amaze and sometimes amuse us all.. nona |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Marge what great expression...don't you often wonder how a shadow can be so heavy...you continue to amaze and sometimes amuse us all.. nona |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This provided wonderful, slow-moving imagery.... well done my friend.... |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
excellent words for the start of my day...thanks Marge!!  SEA |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, in a word this utterly awesome. Really fabulous work dear heart. Always you supply the need of my soul. Great writing absolutely perfect Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
love that 'scoff'.....oh my that is a perfect poem.....thanks lady |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
All smiles here, Marge...the title says it all and the poem is absolutely perfect.  Peace and light to you, my friend. *Krista Knutson* "Can't run fast enough Can't hide I can't fly I'm struggling with the limits of this ordinary life..." ~Tracy Chapman |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
There are shadows in life but we must move on out of them...to where we know the light is...Beautiful write. Poeminister |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Marge~ So true! perfect ending to the poem. Deb |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I'm with doreen...thank you...although the "passing" feels like a kidney stone! sigh...ouch...love ya...hugs m.o.m.s. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Ah I couldn't agree more Marge. It is so good to know that sometimes "this to shall pass" Beautifully penned dear. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
See, I keep telling myself this but I don't listen to myself. I'm going to read this a dozen more times and hope that I listen to you. Thanks! |
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