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ParisGrl
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0 posted 2001-03-02 06:50 PM


I have nothing more to give……what happened to my reasons to live?
What did I do that was so wrong?
I can't do anything right anymore……you have the gall to yell at me
When you created this mess called my life
You know what I'm talking about, or do I have to scream it for you?
These eyes that were once full of hope and promise are now full of sorrow and despair
Tell me where I go to now…..where, where, where?
I've been told I should drop out of school
All my hopes and dreams came crashing to the ground
I feel worthless now….unable to make any sounds
Please tell me why you did this to me?
I couldn't see the danger until it was to late for me
Will there be another tomorrow, another sunny day?
Dear God please just take my life away.

Sorry guys I know this isn't my usual poetry….but it is how I feel right now.



[This message has been edited by ParisGrl (edited 03-02-2001).]

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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2001-03-02 06:57 PM


Yeah i've felt like that, but there will always be another sunny day. Nicely expressed.

The world doesn't stop for you, but you can stop for the world.


SEA
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2 posted 2001-03-02 07:13 PM


it gets better sweetie.........hang in there SEA
walker
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3 posted 2001-03-02 07:24 PM


YES, there will be another sunny day, my friend, even if today is cloudy.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Sven
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4 posted 2001-03-02 10:22 PM






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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

ATelamon
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5 posted 2001-03-02 10:32 PM


The Sun will Rise
Again
and again

Your HeartsBlood overflowing
can be staunched
Even if requires cauterizing

Better the scar
than the endless scream
a bloodletting just enough

To maintain life (Should Any Dare
in their unkowing, call it that)
A time WILL come

Should you proceed
and all that once beguiled to choke
will mean nothing at all

Be well
we die and are reborn
in every twilight
every dawn



"There is one and only one question worth asking or aswering."

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