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Spring Fling |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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 Spring Fling~*Marge Tindal*~ Spring awoke this morning Rubbed the Winter from her eyes Flung her quilt of hibernation Back across a sunlit sky Tip-toed to the window sill Whereupon a Robin's trill Summoned flowers from their beds 'Wake up ! Wake up ! You sleepy heads !' Spring cavorted across the dawn In shades of green upon the lawn Awakened lilies from their sleep Through the chill they'd slumbered deep Showered in the dew of morn Fling of Spring is reborn Toweled in the glow of sun What a season has begun ! Wafting of a perfumed scent Orange blossom breezes blow Spring has marched across this day Oh, how I welcome it so ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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ggrn3 Member
since 2000-08-17
Posts 433Nahunta Georgia U.S. |
Marge Oh, how I loved this one. So elegantly written. Beautiful imagery. Your rhyme; exquisite. I so happy to have had an early "SPRING FLING"  Garfield |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
i really really really really really . . loved it it is so much perfect |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GGRN~ Thank you for being in on this morning of Spring Fling ! DreamLess~ What a super reply. Thank you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge, honestly you amaze me.........the images you bring to mind with the beauty of your words always get me........I just love this.......and I'm keeping it!! SEA |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge--Thank you for this beautiful touch of spring! I see a bit of sun here this morning and the mockingbird is jabbering...that's a good thing. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, thank you for the spring glow, this is truly beautiful and I love it. Always you deliver just what I need to get me through the day. Absolutely fabulous Take care love as always Mushy  I did say I love it didn't I? Just checking!  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Magre, "oh" how your pen paints of the beauty coming makes ones soul dance in the sunlight, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, Marge.... your poem flings joy... I love the way you captured the cavorting. *G* (But couldja do something about all this pollen? *G* Ahhhh-chooooo! Pretty please? LOL) |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Words to put a spring in my step and a twinkle in my eye, thank you for the motivation, wonderful write Marge. Regards, Olias. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Showered in the dew of morn Fling of Spring is reborn Toweled in the glow of sun What a season has begun ! Wafting of a perfumed scent Orange blossom breezes blow Spring has marched across this day Oh, how I welcome it so ! =================== oh you lil ray of sunshine you... could ya bottle some of this and send it to ole St.Lou.. its snowing here ... and Im so ready for warm weather and spring flowers!! sweet treat of the seasons anticipation from your pen Margie-girl Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Spring has sprung!  I love the personification in this one. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SEA~ These beautiful sights are written all over this day ! Thanks, doll ! Martie~ Even the Cardinals came to the windowsill for breakfast of sunflower seeds this morning ! ! Such joy is mine - Spring is here ! MarshaLove~ You did ! And I'm glad you do ! Cerenity~ Alright ! That's just what we need - a little dance of Spring ! SuthernGal~ I'll send the honey bees !  OLIAS~ Thank YOU ! I love to share a twinkle ! JanetMarie~ You just need to slip the snow and head on down to The Sunshine State ! ! We are alive with Spring ! Elizabeth~ And a glorious sight it is ! Every tree and flower is gowned in the full splendor of Spring. *Come on down, folks !  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
every day I greet that looks like spring - is followed by an omnious weather report - - (think I don't want to be in Fla right now? ~G~) - beautifully written - i'm ready for a fling right now for sure! |
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bsquirrel
since 2000-01-03
Posts 7855 |
Hey, Marge! I love it. Your control of language is superb. Especially the "toweled in the glow of sun." Now if it'd only stop raining. (pout) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Marge, Excellent...Very vivid and refreshing... Nicely done. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Just hop a freight train ... and mosey on down here ! It reached the mid-80's today ! Mike~ Thank you so much. When the words blossom - I lose control ! Sending a sliver of sunshine your way ! PoeMinister~ Thanks, heaps. It is truly a refreshing and welcomed season ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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