Open Poetry #12 |
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To Turn A Smile |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines ![]() |
To Turn A Smile This morning lost, I felt to be as fever caught it's hold on me, and every drop of tears to flow induced in me, the thoughts I know. Sitting up and waiting dawn, reading words that always spawn the best of me to paint my hues, as sunlight canvassed thoughts on blue. My rainbow blend curved upside down could turn a smile, from once a frown instead of sliding off its end, inside my thoughts would rock the bend. And when your poems reach my heart my fears and hurts take off, depart to leave me warm and cozy then 'Til next we meet, my rhyming friend. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
'And when your poems reach my heart...' As this one did, I smile. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
J and walker, thank you..I appreciate your kind words always huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
your poem have reached my heart.. it have touched me deep in the soul.. when i read it i felt so warm it made me smile.. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wynter, So beautiful penned my dear and of course I wear a smile ![]() Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Wynter- enjoyed this read and it too made me smile ![]() loved this... take care amy ![]() "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dreamless SEA Cerenity Amy I just want to thank you all for responding so nicely to my words..I have had the flu or something, for so long I just was hoping eventually to be feeling better and finally it is beginning to leave me. Thank you again huggsssss ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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