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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-28 05:28 PM

To Turn A Smile

This morning lost, I felt to be
as fever caught it's hold on me,
and every drop of tears to flow
induced in me, the thoughts I know.

Sitting up and waiting dawn,
reading words that always spawn
the best of me to paint my hues,
as sunlight canvassed thoughts on blue.

My rainbow blend curved upside down
could turn a smile, from once a frown
instead of sliding off its end,
inside my thoughts would rock the bend.

And when your poems reach my heart
my fears and hurts take off, depart
to leave me warm and cozy then
'Til next we meet, my rhyming friend.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-02-28 05:48 PM

'And when your poems reach my heart...'
As this one did, I smile.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-02-28 08:17 PM

Very beautiful!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2001-02-28 10:21 PM

J and walker, thank you..I appreciate your kind words always

huggzz

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

DreamLess
Member

since 2001-02-28

Posts 92

4 posted 2001-03-01 03:23 AM

your poem have reached my heart..
it have touched me deep in the soul..

when i read it i felt so warm it made me smile..

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-03-01 09:51 AM

this is so nice.....

SEA

Cerenity
Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

6 posted 2001-03-02 06:34 PM

Hi Wynter,

So beautiful penned my dear and of course I wear a smile

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2001-03-03 04:13 AM

Wynter-

enjoyed this read and it too made me
smile

fantastic writing! really
loved this...

take care
amy

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

8 posted 2001-03-03 06:13 AM

Dreamless
SEA
Cerenity
Amy

I just want to thank you all for responding so nicely to my words..I have had the flu or something, for so long I just was hoping eventually to be feeling better and finally it is beginning to leave me.

Thank you again huggsssss

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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