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Aimster
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0 posted 2001-02-28 01:45 PM


i was having a discussion with a good friend
of mine today...this is from where this poem
originates

Ponderings

I sit by the window today
Looking at the deep blue sky
For the millionth time in the last few weeks
I once again ponder why

They say that life is what you make of it
That everything happens for a reason
Time ticks endlessly by
Things change like the passing of a season

For the life of me though
I don't understand the circumstances of my life as of late
I know that we all have a purpose
That our lives are controlled by destiny and fate

I feel like I'm in a whirlwind
With confusion all around
Life a bird that has fallen out of it's nest
Meeting reality...the hard ground

I go about my days best that I know how
Drawing strength from everything that happens to me
Trying hard not to think of you
Thinking I am happy to be free

But when you've spent so much time with another
Giving so much of your heart
It's really hard trying to figure out
Just exactly how to make a new start

I know my life is guided
By a sweet Angel above
Also know that I am very lucky
To have known and know such love

There are so many questions I have
Very little answers do I know
However I also know with experiences
We learn and we grow

I think back to when I was a child
How much life was easier then
About how I use to complain it was so hard
I couldn't have been but only ten (lol)

Then I think of my life now
All the changes that have occurred
About all the pain but also happiness
That I have endured

I look to tomorrow
As I look back at that great blue sky
Knowing my next step isn't back to the nest
It's time to spread my wings...and fly

Amy Michelle Kennedy


"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words."


© Copyright 2001 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth
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1 posted 2001-02-28 02:18 PM


Spread those wings, Amy.
EagleOne
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2 posted 2001-02-28 03:02 PM


Ramble on!

"I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly

Marsha
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3 posted 2001-02-28 03:29 PM


Amy dear heart, this is utterly wonderful, as I've said it's like reading starlight, it shines with so much of your heart.
Spread those wings Amy love, and if ever you need a breath of wind or a little lift then I will be there for you.
Take care love as always this is a truly terrific piece. I love it
Mushy

Love ya lil sis always


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning



Sven
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4 posted 2001-02-28 06:22 PM


fly on gentle heart. . .



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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
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5 posted 2001-02-28 06:31 PM


'They say that life is what you make of it
That everything happens for a reason
Time ticks endlessly by
Things change like the passing of a season

For the life of me though
I don't understand the circumstances of my life as of late
I know that we all have a purpose
That our lives are controlled by destiny and fate'

Great lines here, Aims...and I agree. Everything does happen for a reason, but, it beats me what those reasons are! Wonderful write here, girlie...I enjoyed and related to it a LOT!!

-e ~~~~~~


everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

snowpants
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6 posted 2001-02-28 06:32 PM


oh yeah...btw...this is far from rambling, silly...

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Zinsser
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7 posted 2001-02-28 06:33 PM


Very hard stuff to go through ....Love the poem very much...emotion is real

Thank You
~~~Connie~~~

Poeminister
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8 posted 2001-02-28 06:35 PM


Aim--I like the direction this poem takes...you express your self very well.

Poeminister

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