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Open Poetry #12

Nature's Outrage

Red-uni
Member

since 2000-07-30

Posts 192
Georgia, USA

0 posted 2001-02-28 01:16 AM

Sky angry and dark, lightening ripped across the clouds.
Thunder rumbled, as rain came down hard.
Small plants trampled, without a chance of growing.
The wind furious as roofs blew off, windows broken.
Inside she watched the awesome power.
It is a violent night, like her years of growing up.
Nature put on a show, as memories ran through her mind.
Her young mind was fragmented, as terror had ruled her home.
Now, she comprehends, now she can in time become one.
The others now share secrets; actions in the past unfold.
And she shall see the calm that’s after the storm.

Red-uni © 2/01

Krawdad
Member Elite

since 2001-01-03

Posts 2597

1 posted 2001-02-28 01:41 AM

Angry, ripped, trampled, furious . . .
Like the way you made the transition here. Nice work, red!

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-28 08:18 PM

comparing the two storms. . . which causes more damage???

excellent. . .

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