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Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-02-27 11:31 PM

Burst of Storm

look at us! a connection
burst reconnecting
now, in this life
sparking delight
fingertips sparkling
a mystery of light

touch me now!
for no caress will do
no! we meet with
cymballic nature
and symbolic fervor
and symbols that tremble

thunder rumbles
flashing crashes
and in the aftermath
in the aftermath
God will grant us
breath…

breathe for me
please, exhale
let me know you
live,
and let me know
you forgive
the fact that we
have waited so long
to reconnect….

in circumspect

should we wait
or crash again
bring the air up tight
and let it spin
tornado a moment
or hurricane a sigh
or let it go
by and bye

comfort comes
in the aftermath
it lends its way
down long green path

ah, but see the sight
white of light
within dark of bright
clouds make night
within the day
electric confluence
holds the sway
know that I am
within your charm
but I am grounded
within your arms

afterwhich
the ozone lays
new and bright
and comes in haze
of nebulous feel
a miraculous real

and look at us
we are
an appeal,,,

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-02-27 11:47 PM

Karilea~
Well .... it certainly appeals to me ! !
Me likes muchly !

Had to turn off the computer earlier,
cause we had a burst of storm !
Different storm for sure !
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

2 posted 2001-02-27 11:52 PM

This is too cool!! So creative I thought. I enjoyed this.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-27 11:59 PM

This has a marvelous feel to it as it is read. Well done!

Alwye

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Member Elite

since 1999-06-16

Posts 3850
In the space between moments

4 posted 2001-02-28 12:15 PM

Awesome Sunshine! This has spectacular word usage and ideas....and a great flow and format to top it all of! Incredibly well done, I'm impressed my friend!

*Krista Knutson*

I'm a slow dying flower
In a frost-killing hour
The sweet turning sour and untouchable...
-Natalie Merchant

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

5 posted 2001-02-28 12:21 PM

The perfect storm... Love it.

Poeminister

"There is no remedy for love but to love more."
--Henry David Thoreau

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-28-2001).]

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