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Open Poetry #12

I struggle

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-27 07:27 PM

I struggle,
with my own self,
between right and wrong,
that's where I stand.
My mind wants to do right,
but my body can't.
What brings me to you,
will surely suffice to
send me to hell,
within a matter of time.
I have much to loose,
and nothing to gain.
This passion, within me
I must condemn.
To hold you once more,
will tear me apart.
To set you free,
will liberate me.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

1 posted 2001-02-27 07:32 PM

...It doesn't sound like you've got nothing to gain. And the passion is palpable! Good piece!

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

2 posted 2001-02-27 07:35 PM

Super insight to the inner turmoil we all go through.
Wonderfully said!!
*thanx*

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