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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Anew Virginia Salter drenched land standing puddles earth in shock from rocking moisture gray skies unseen clouds sputter, splinter onto terra changing season boggles reason winter’s treason breaks toward spring drinking, drinking fast as able tulips, crocus daffodils ancient blades still at attention monuments to seasons past looking out within my shelter pondering the brink of life one edge or other is where I be the end of winter the beginning of spring each year a chance to begin life anew © February 22, 2001 |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Each season, bring new promises.Well expressed! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ah yes, new beginings........always feels so good.......  SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thank you both, I'm happy you read and especially that you commented such nice words. The day is still gray here, but it's different from the winter grays. Several finches were dining at the feeder, too. That put sunshine in my step today. |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Spring always has a way of making all things seem possible. Enjoyed this. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, Poet deVine, yep, I'm even thinking about trying to get a tradition of starting new year's resolutions in the spring time. I never make them anymore because I always falter soon. Plus if I make them out loud than others will know I failed, too. But I'm thinking that when spring is making new leaves that it may be easier to 'turn over a new leaf' what do you think? |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
it's snowing here, Vas...i don't mind, love the snow spring will come soon...hang on enjoyed your poem! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
hiya VAS, this is excellent writing sweetie... I liked the way the poem flowed so smoothly I enjoyed the read PoetFriend... ~coco~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
VAS--Interesting descriptions in this...altogether a wonderful write. Enjoyed. Poeminister |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
N.C., Coco and Poeminister, I really enjoyed your comments. Yes spring will come. My yellow and purple crocuses are blooming their heads off. The mornings are still glazed in winter's frosting. Yummmmmmmmm! |
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