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Open Poetry #12

I'll wait for you

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-27 07:16 PM

I'll wait for to love me,
even if it takes forever.
My world will cease,
if you never love me.
You don't have to make promises,
just give me a little hope,
that you'll one day, love me some.
I'll wait around for you.
On my cold nights,I will dream
of this love, that soon will be born.
It robs me of my sleep,
but feeds my grieving heart.
I wait for you to love me,
even if it takes a lifetime.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

mystic requiem
Member

since 2001-01-26

Posts 144

1 posted 2001-02-27 07:40 PM

Can a person live on dreams?
I think so.
Well done!
*thanx*

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

2 posted 2001-02-27 08:32 PM

Dare I say

"Careful what you wish for..."
At the end of time, you may find, you waited for pure, unadalterated PAIN.

I Hope it is not SO.
Regards
AT = Archimedes Telamon

"For al these things, honor, dishonor, pain... happen to all men. They are not the mark of a virtuous life... or lack thereof" Marcus Aurelius

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

3 posted 2001-02-27 09:00 PM

I used to be that brave. Well done.

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