dreamkeeper's challenge("within this tender flame")

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Open Poetry #12

dreamkeeper's challenge("within this tender flame")

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

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California, USA

0 posted 2001-02-27 08:08 AM

"within this tender flame"

burning love and candlelight
cast shadows on the wall
moving picture sillouettes
a flickering free-for-all

golden orb of glowing warmth
a passion to be tamed
as lovers pass the time away
within this tender flame

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

SEA

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since 2000-01-18

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with you

1 posted 2001-02-27 09:01 AM

Beautifully done.....and welcome!

SEA

Poet deVine

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2 posted 2001-02-27 09:15 AM

Wow...this is lovely!! It flows so nicely...

Packratmike
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since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

3 posted 2001-02-27 03:07 PM

Thank you Sea and PDV for the nice comments.....and a big thanks to dreamkeeper for the inspiring challenge.

"HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike

Sven

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since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-27 07:07 PM

now you know that I loved this one. . .

excellent. . .

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