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What Difference
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What Difference |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
What difference ...can any manifest .....hope that Lighthouse keepers beam a candle wick we forget to light what difference ...the ships would impale .....themselves on reefs all the same lighted or not and so I stand here wondering should I light the candle burning or leave all to the night I look to my life and find only one answer I wonder would yours here be the same sad sighs as I light the altar of life "Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion. [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 03-01-2001).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi ATelamon, If im understanding this correctly, alot of people at times feel like you do, but I think if no chances are taken then to always wonder and wander, I liked this, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Light the candle, you never know who's looking for a refuge. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
a sad sigh echoed back..... i appreciate your unique style of expression and could very much identify with this one. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and I in dark of night feel for the candle and touch the unlit wick in the dark wondering if my wondering would bring the flame to me... Excellent....you are giving much in the way of inspiration today... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and so I stand here wondering should I light the candle burning or leave all to the night I look to my life and find only one answer I wonder would yous here be the same sad sighs as I light the altar of life ==================== excellent use of imagery, metaphor, and comparisons to enchance the emotions very cool write here... unique style of expression well done. take care jm Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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