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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania 
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Two amongst many Quickly become One amongst none As my eyes see Only you And as our gazes lock We are carried away Far above this earth and Tears of tragedies below, Above sighs of frustration, And the unhappiness of others Far above the chaos we call Life...to Heaven. Where we are finally alone Free from distractions of The real world And in one all our own. Even if we are simply One amongst many. Story Behind This One: I went to my gram's this morning before school like I always do and found a stack of pictures on my kitchen table. One of my aunt and uncle caught my eye for some reason. This is what came of it. ~Susie Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are calle |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is so sweet! I really enjoyed this......very touching  SEA |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Interesting...James |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Sweet story behind the poem...and I like the poem very much. |
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Agust P Member
since 2000-12-29
Posts 157 |
Very nice poem, thanks! AP |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sometimes the little telling behind the inspiration brings that much more realism to a lovely write.... as this did! |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Susie, this is wonderful! Are you going to show it to your aunt and uncle? |
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Angel Senior Member
since 1999-07-02
Posts 551Pennsylvania |
SEA, Thanks I'm so glad you enjoyed it. James Michael, Thank you  JLR, I'm glad you enjoyed it. August P, Anytime. Sunshine, I couldn't help it. I was looking at the picture and the poem hit me like a rock .Elizabeth, Thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed, but I doubt it. Thanks Everyone. ~Susie Many people hear voices when no one is there. Some of them are called mad and are shut up in rooms where they stare at walls all day. Others are calle |
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