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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA 
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able not am I to see the waning light that followed thee along a path God led from me able not am I to see able not am I to speak those words of love in passion's heat forever lost in silence deep able not am I to speak able not am I to hear that golden voice close to my ear its warmth replaced with cold dense drear able not am I to hear able not am I to touch in evening's chill with tender trust that rosy cheek I loved so much able not am I to touch able not am I to breathe sweet scented air surrounding me in quiet times once spent with thee able not am I to breathe able not am I to cry no tears will flow about my eyes well maybe just a simple sigh.... able not am I to see [This message has been edited by Packratmike (edited 02-27-2001).] |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I like the repeated phrases. I love the whole work! |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful, excellent flow. This is outstanding. Gentle and emotional. I loved this. Keeping, Keeping, Keeping!!!!!  "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Thanks JLR & dreamkeeper....I started this simple poem while caught in cross-town traffic. I began with just a simple phrase that stuck in my mind and a elaborated a bit when I got home. I'm glad you like it. |
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