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Open Poetry #12

At the end of my day

walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-26 05:29 PM

I been very busy since
we've been apart.But
at the end of my day,
when I'm tired and lonely,
you will enter my mind,
claiming your spot.
I will keep you,
all night. In the TV, I'll see you.
In a good book, I'll read you.
You will sleep by my side,
I will make love to you.
And when I rise in the morning,
you'll be gone 'till tonight.

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-26 05:31 PM

Ah yes, memories sometimes ghost us along....

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-26 06:05 PM

Walker, you have a wonderfully open honesty in your writing that simpily shines. I love it!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-07-22

Posts 9245
Illinois

3 posted 2001-02-27 09:32 AM

Very well written! We all have those moments when they linger with us. You've described it well.

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