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ATelamon
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since 2001-02-06
Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

0 posted 2001-02-26 04:12 PM


One day is all
in and alike
each other

yet this music life
I live in sounds
every moment

but this day

the world became
a very
silent place



"Decisions are Dominoes. Pause to reflect, before you set them in motion.

[This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-26-2001).]

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Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2001-02-26 04:19 PM


To lose the abilty to hear beauty is a very sad thing and you have painted it well.
write on
Kethry


Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.



JLR
Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785

2 posted 2001-02-26 04:24 PM


I read all your poems...but understand so few. Your talent. My loss. This one I understand. Paramount to the silence I believe is when the music hurts and so I must back away. Thanks for this!
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