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“The Storm Within the Calm”
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“The Storm Within the Calm” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 Outside the calm belies the storm within… The deafening thunder, lightning flash, and roaring of the wind… A smiling face to show the world that nothing’s going on… While just inside, the storm is raging strong… The storm begins with waking at the dawn… When realization, mixed with truth, fight courage to belong… They place themselves beside the door, that keeps them all at bay… The door stays locked…the key stays hid away… Those closest sense the storm and feel it’s course… They know the power that’s held within, and see it’s raging force… Destruction in denial looms upon each morning’s light… Those closest make their stand, prepared to fight… The storm that rages makes us who we are… And though the howling winds and swelling seas are never far… We hold their power inside our souls, to use as healing balm… The storm within subsides into the calm… Write on! -<--<--{(@ [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 01-14-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A most Passionate storm indeed... well done my Sunny1... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Sunshine ~~~ Thank you, my friend, for your reply to my work.......it means so much....  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Very powerful and emotional piece, Sunny! Yes, all our pain and sorrow will break up into the calmness of love and joy! May love and light overcome all! Thank you for sharing, my friend! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Noah ~~~ I do so thank you for the insight in your reply! You've understood exactly the meaning I needed to convey, and I feel now as though I succeeded!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sunny1~ This is absolutely beautiful ! The calm before the storm - is often elusive~ but the calm after the storm is usually beautiful. That graphic is sooooooo lovely. It sets the mood for your poem so well. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Wonderful images, Sunny, I love this. Sandra |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
If not for the storms in our life we may not ever appreciate the calm. Excellent piece from you and this one truely brings a bit to ponder with it. You have penned a wonderful poem to reflect on and I am sure it will cause me to do just that. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
i love this Sunny..so beautiful..and i just love the painting..enchanting..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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bbent Senior Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 521Alaska |
Hi Sunny A wonderfull tribute to the human spirit.. Storms never last do they Sunny?............ bbent and Waylon ~ live and let live ~ |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Marge ~~~ I thank you so much, and glad that we can share the beauty of the calm... ~~~ Sandra ~~~ I know that you love beaches, as I do!! Wouldn't it be nice to just walk along this one after a storm? ~~~ Mark ~~~ Oh, yes, my Brother.....the pensitive poems are my favorites. For if there is no message, what is there to remember? ~~~ V ~~~ I knew that you would appreciate the graphics that matched the words, as you have the eye of a true artist!! Thank you!! ~~~ bbent ~~~ You are right, and storms never last...... but the best part is that 'bad times all pass with the wind'....Thank you so much!! (Sunny and Waylon....with whom I would dearly love to sing this as a duet!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Beki Senior Member
since 1999-09-15
Posts 1569Newport Beach, CA, USA |
very nicely said my friend, enjoyed. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
WOW!!! Sunny I loved this, fantastic read my friend and that image just wonderful ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Beki ~~~ So glad that you came by and enjoyed this one!! I'm always happy to see you visit!! ~~~ Tracie ~~~ Oh...I liked that graphic too...it makes me want to walk on the beach after a storm, when everything is still frothing, but subsiding and peaceful!! Thank you!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Lady Ollyne Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 337East Coast |
Lady First of Sun, I have ridden the storm through a reign of hurt to have risen above to float the clouds yet the deafening roar, remains to remind of a time that must be overcome, and someday, it shall... 'tis your beautiful words I read this morn... Lady Ollyne "O, learn to read what silent love hath writ: To hear with eyes belongs to love's fine wit"...Shakespeare |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Lady Ollyne ~~~ Oh.....your verse is wonderful!! Thank you so much!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Tennessee Angel Senior Member
since 2000-06-03
Posts 661Tennessee |
Oh Sunny, every line was so touching! I loved this piece and that picture is just mesmerizing. Great Work! |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very beautiful and I loved the graphic too! Nathan |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ T.A. ~~~ Oh, I thank you for checking this one out! I love the ocean and whether it's after a storm or before one, I always feel the power. ~~~ Nate ~~~ Ah, thank you, too, my friend. When I saw this picture, I just felt like it belonged with this poem. Glad you enjoyed it also!! Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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