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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-13 02:45 AM

sublime decadence
imagination runs wild
lunar night visions

© 2001 Koko Stewart Koomoa
(All rights reserved)

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

1 posted 2001-01-13 03:12 PM

wonderful done my friend.....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2001-01-13 03:43 PM

Wonderful description Koko, lovely haiku!

Best wishes,
/Kit

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

3 posted 2001-01-13 09:49 PM

thanks so much for commenting

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-01-13 11:33 PM

I like this haiku...nicely done...

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

tracie66
Member Elite

since 2000-01-18

Posts 4713
Australia

5 posted 2001-01-13 11:36 PM

Oh Koko this is soo beautiful lovely little haiku so very well done
~HUG~
Tracie~

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe

Dennis L. White
Senior Member

since 2000-02-17

Posts 1463
Michigan, U.S.A.

6 posted 2001-01-14 02:52 PM

Koko,
Excellent subject for haiku, and you write so well!
Dennis :^)

Moonbeams radiate
When the veiling cloud has passed
Playful shadows dance

Dennis L. White :^)

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-01-14 03:17 PM

Koko
Well done!
for what you believe
images grow in moonshine
and decadence reigns
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

8 posted 2001-01-15 02:04 PM

Now that's the kind of moonshine I like...the golden glimmer across the waters or new-fallen snow...glorious!

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

9 posted 2001-01-16 12:38 PM

Beautiful piece and I loved the graphic!

Nathan

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