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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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I write on loss of love So you will understand; It's more the loss of inner self That motivates my hand In searching for my child I wander hither, yon My sanity is kept in writing So I keep penning on I write of loss of dreams It's much easier to tell Than speak of life torn at the seams Or dwelling here in hell In scrying out my soul That's bound in bitter tears Writing only makes me seem whole And helps me bear the years I write of loss of hope Yet hope can more be found More easier than the loss of me; All my thoughts are bound I seek the inner me to motivate my hand Cloaked in words of errant love So you might understand Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart, how awesome is this! How utterly truthful and beautiful is this piece! Absolutely stunning, this is truly outstanding. Pure beauty and truth, I really love this one dear heart, you have written some gems before, you're always writing jewels. But this is soooooooo wonderful that it takes my breath away. Take care love as always Slushy  WOW  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
This may be one of the most insightful tributes to the pen that I have seen within these walls. Excellent creation from you describing where a flow of words may be birthed from. Well written in content and in it's rhythm. |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Think it, then write it. Very therapeutic. Good one. Melton |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
So do I (((hug)))) "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marsha, you always think my poems are jewels is that why you're trying to bury me with work and get me back to my natural habitat. *GRiNS* Mark, It was what I felt at the time, I don't know about insightful, but it fitted me, or at least one of me. 2dalimit, I would and I did Kathleen, I know love *HuGS* Thanks for your kind words, when my eyes are blinded by pain it's nice to know your are there and that you care. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
An excellent explanation of why we write... well done! *S* And one day soon my hope is that Your pen will share the tale Of everlasting happiness And a love that will never fail. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the power of your other hand my friend. . . excellent writing. . .  ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
From your heart...to your pen...to my heart...hugs |
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DreamLess Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 92 |
nice one . . . keep the good work |
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Secret Whisper Member
since 2001-01-25
Posts 298Through the Looking Glass |
Yes! I feel the need to write as an extender of this life. How wonderful that i am not alone. Excellent write. Sorrowful yet hopeful. "Death marks the beginning, not the end. It is our journey to God." --Billy Graham |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Thanks for responding, suthern, my wish for you is the same, may you find the happy ever after. Sven, yes...on the other hand... Paula, and from your heart round again. Dream Less, thanks doesn't nearly say it but it's allI have. Thanks Secret Whisper, even you're replies are poetic. Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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