Open Poetry #12 |
This Heart (Another shape, Margie girl is it okay?) |
Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
This Heart *~ This heart ~ ~ Hear it beat ~* Flutters within Calls forth heat I’ll be faithful until eternity ends For the past I’ll make amends In me you’ll find such fire The flames burn higher Reach on out to me This love is free Feel all this Taste my Kiss * Marsha [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Beautiful! I love the set up of this! Couldn't help but notice your middle name. If I'd had a daughter last year, I was going to name her Grace. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I love it and the gifs you used are perfectly placed *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha ~ * ~ Grace Of course it's swell within your heart I can tell that you are just a spirit free * *Go girlie ! Love ya' ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh my, this is just lovely with a wonderful presentation! Take care, Melissa~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Very sweet and nice...filled with heart! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Marsha, this is awesome... Your presentation is exquisite Your expression is adoring And in my opinion you've succeeded in sharing a poem I for one shall treasure... Psst... any chance that you do another one pretty please ~coco~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love the set up! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mushy~~~~~Girlie this is beautifully done I like the shape very much It looks like it's hard, without knowing exactly how to go about doing it |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Splendid job on this Mushy! You got the heart part all set and now you've got to find that forever kiss! It's out there...... be patient! Great job on this one!! Prinny The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
nicely done.. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Thank you all for reading this, mainly if not wholely this is a product of Margie girls work and effort. If she hadn't shown me how then there wouldn't be shape here at all, or there might have been but it would have been wonky, very wonky! Thank you all muchly Take care love as always Mushy <.font> Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-28-2001).] |
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