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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana 
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"If I were her husband," I said to God one day She'd be content each day and every night I'd leave a flower for her, just a single rose to say that she is my entire thought and all my gleaming light. Were I her husband she would know and so would God above that even though I sometimes go I never leave her love. My words would be for her alone and every touch from tenderness she'll never feel the coldest stone just love from me, no restlessness. Were I her husband, in our bed I'd worship her totality and make her blush, three shades of red when she returns it all to me! thank you all! Dennis |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
very sweet Dennis *s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
She would be lucky to have you as her husband! Very sweet poem.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
dennis.........who could ask for more?....helen |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
She would be very lucky to have you. This was so sweet!!  Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Would you put your socks in the hamper too??????? If so I'm over here waiving my hand!  LOLBeautiful. Is hard to see someone taken for granted, and not cherished. Especially when it's someone who deserves it. Nice write! "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is just SO sweet! Make the girls swoon.......but yes, the socks and "stuff" in the hamper, and you'll have 'em lining up!! SEA |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Nakdthoughts: change that name, Lady, it's difficult to type with a clear mind! Thank you! Voiceless: well, I"m not perfect but thanks! 1slick_lady: these names, these names, oh, Helen, that's pretty, thanks Lone Wolf: thank you! Dreamkeeper: Socks in the hamper, I would do my own laundry, hampers are too heavy for a lady. SEA: no lines only takes one-the right one! thank you! Dennis [This message has been edited by Dennis (edited 02-26-2001).] |
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