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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597
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You have blue lilacs! Pretentious, My lost desire bloomed in your lovely eyes. /:^)== =#== |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is wonderful! How I love those blue lilacs, and this poem........  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Krawdad, interesting style,not pretentious at all write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Finally I found another of yours. Hadn't seen anything since your "Yellow Moon." This place is so busy I had to search clear to page 4 before I found this. So here it is, back on 1 for a couple minutes, anyway. ;o} |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
okay...the rule is? any poem about blue eyes is written for me or Christopher...now who's it gonna be? LOL...and a very nice bit of poetry here, my mystery bug... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Krawdad, A very lovely read. Write on... Elise |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Sunny1 - too bad we can't share that lilac aroma about now . . . Kethry - serendipitous actually, but to act on that seemed pretentious to me. VAS - well, I'm not exactly prolific, at least by comparison to others around here, so there isn't a lot to look for. Not even two handsful yet, scattered around. But thanks for looking, there will be more. serenity - blue eyes? No, blue lilacs, "lovely" eyes. And I'm sure yours are that too, but now you have some more competition.  "Bug", eh? As in bed bug?Say, are you skipping class? Where is your acrostic? Out with it! athena4 - thanks, I'm scribblin' as fast as I can. /:^)== =#== |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Beautiful write! Nathan |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
Oh...what an awesome description of the baby blue's. "The lost desire bloomed in your lovely eyes" ok...i'm hooked. good one krawdad! thanks for sharing.  Pixydust |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Good day, I like this. I'm a minimulist myself most of the time, in writing,...I also took a look at your acrostics...very nicely done. Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-16-2001).] |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Short yes, but very sweet and beautiful. Sometimes the less you say, the more you say. Exellent work!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful words you have here! Nicely said for blue eyes |
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