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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Moonlight Meditations |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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In my moonlight meditations, I think of how things were- And wish, too late, that I had chosen you instead of her. I don’t even have your picture, but I guess that’s just as well, I’ll always see you as you were the night you cast your spell. Forgotten vows and promises, and plans that once we made- But lies, and lines, and alibis were once my stock in trade. When two are fools and break the rules, through love, or lust, or spite... Then rest assured the past comes back, to haunt you every night. Each day I’m growing older, I know not where you’ve gone- Nor who you spend your time with, as I lay here all alone... I trust that you are well now, I hope you’re doing fine- In my moonlight meditations, you keep strolling through my mind. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I have some of these meditations also Gunslinger....James |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Gunslinger, It's so nice to see you and be reading the beauty in your words, moonlight has a way of bringing out memories from our past, wonderful poetry here, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The memories are but always there at night they either haunt or bring splender... Very well done.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
So nice to see you here again, Gunslinger....and I love the poem. Moonlight memories can be like torture. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Great writing, John!! Tugs at my heart! So nice to see you here again!! |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas |
Thank each of you so very much for the commentary, and welcome. *sniff |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Slinger~ 'In my moonlight meditations, you keep strolling through my mind.' That is such a beautiful stroll that I've taken often ... Lovely thoughts from you this evening. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Dear Troubadour, is it really you??  I am recently returned as well, and am delighted to see your poem here tonight. This is superb. A classic piece of rumination. Thanks for it and hurry share another! Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
so sad, but nicely written, Gunslinger enjoyed the read |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Well written... excellent poetry as we have come to expect from your pennings... |
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Packratmike Senior Member
since 2001-02-25
Posts 632California, USA |
Been there and done that......guess we all can identify with this subject. Great job! "HEY, DON'T THROW THAT AWAY, I MIGHT NEED IT SOMEDAY!!!" Packratmike |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This reminds me of some wonderings of my own. *S* Great job, GS... |
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