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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2001-02-25 11:18 AM

Every second,
Every minute,
Spending time with you,
feels like a heaven
sent you to me,
Every single moment,
Wnen I am with you,
you touch ,
Like a flower grows,
Single moment
with you,
It Is so real,
When you say
every word,
It Is true,
I believe
every word you say,
I like it
to spend a moment
with you,
Because your love
Is so pericous to me,
When you will be away,
I will be thinking of
this moment,
I will never forget this moment,
And I will treasure
this every single moment,
I will fold this petal
of this rose
you gave to me,
I will put this petal
on my book,
Whenever,
I will open this book,
And take a look
at this petal,
I will cherish
every single moment,
I was spending lifetime
with you,
Every single moment,
Single moment,

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 02-25-2001).]

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2001-02-25 11:21 AM

And with each moment of this beautiful poem comes the sweet smell of love and dedication to the heart. Wonderful write. I really enjoyed this read and it's purity of heart.

walker
Member Elite

since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

2 posted 2001-02-25 11:36 AM

That's love, posted beautifully and pure!

A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

3 posted 2001-02-25 11:41 AM

Vandana
Lovely sentiments. Enjoyed the read.

Poeminister

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

4 posted 2001-02-25 01:14 PM

the nice thing about single moments is that we can put them all together to make lifetime. . .

wonderful vandana. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-02-25 01:42 PM

vandana,

Beautiful moments my friend.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-02-25 02:18 PM

Enjoyed reading this vandana....James

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

7 posted 2001-02-25 03:45 PM

'Every second,
Every minute,
Spending time with you,
feels like a heaven
sent you to me,'

Beautiful write, vandana! Love it!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

8 posted 2001-02-25 04:00 PM

A sweet poem!

~*Peachy Be*~

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