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Sea Of Sorrow
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Sea Of Sorrow |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Sea Of Sorrow Oh, how I've been holding every emotion one can find And, they all hold every part of you I've felt every sea Gods made out there in this world And, only he knows I've been every shade of blue... My latest cry is in the middle of the darkest night When every soul lies in the deepest sleep But, I lie awake in the memory of her face And, I just walk hopelessly along every blue like sea... It's the sea of sorrow my soul makes a path along I only barely make it through So, I drag my feet in the deep brown sand Trying to find the sun that I once knew... It rains endlessly on me when moments come to mind My heavy heart feels each raindrop that falls God, how do I walk the sea of sorrow in a happier way? When I never seem to hear her singing for me at all... She promised me that the stars would always be mine But, the sea is more raging than before I don't have the strength to push away the endless waters at my feet... I just carry the sorrow from shore to shore... Life's sea of sorrow is a never ending path All I want is to live life in her eyes Let me say, God, what I never got the chance to say And, maybe then it won't rain and I won't cry... So, you'll find me where both calm and raging is heard And, praying the storms leave my aching heart The sea of sorrow is where I'll live the rest of my days Pulling myself in the depth of sadness while we are apart... Saun Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
every shade of blue...~sighhh could feel that in your poem Saunni ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Saunni - your 'Sea Of Sorrow' is written from a sad heart, but beautiful in own way. I know your pain, and sadness, and wish you well. BC |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When sadness is expressed in such a lovely fashion as this it leaves no doubt as to the depth of love in your heart nor the pain you feel. Your pen honors you just as you honor her with your words. Well written my friend. God bless you! |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Saun... What depth the sorrow has in this writing... It is enough to tug at anyone's heart, my friend, and it is beautiful in it's sadness.. Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Thank you all for replying to my poem  It means a lot. Thanks again.Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed. . . we've all sailed on the sea of sorrow. . . but there's always a harbor of love to be found. . . . excellent. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You've written well the sadness of feeling forsaken 'cept for loneliness... Great work! |
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