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In Glow Of Candle Light
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In Glow Of Candle Light |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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In Glow of Candle Light Your silhouette obscured in candle lights glow, eyes not needing clarification, you're simply picturesque. Your movement soft, elegant to the melody, heart pounding as I near your presence. Catching hint of perfumes sweet persuasion, wanting only to be in your embrace. Music plays endlessly, our intertwined bodies letting no more than garments width between. Losing all sense of reality, nothing comparing to the feelings that flow. Two transformed in compelling desire, surrendering to natural emotions willingly. Never wanting the melody of loves sweet embrace to be extinguished. Upon our minds passions quill writes, repertoire of hearts beating unity’s drum effortlessly. Symphony’s cymbals crash giving way to ecstasy, secrets exchanged memorie's to cherish. And the glow slowly fades in time passed. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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SEA 
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow.......soft, sensual, and romantic.........beautifully done!!  SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sheerily a symphony to the senses...a pleasure to read. Poeminister |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ Simply soft and lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh.....what a wonderful read, from beginning to end!! It was like a celebration, and left me with a smile!!  Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Sea,Poeminister,Marge,Vandana,Sunnyone Thank you all for the lovely replys, it was a lonely night last night so I blasted the music lit about twenty candles and this is what I came up with, theres something about candles, Love Cerenity |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Cerenity, this is so wonderful from you. . . very different. . . I really love it. . . so soft and romantic. . . *sigh*. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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