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| Open Poetry #12 |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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When? Doves of enchantment Sing from the rafters Cooing a love song Each day they repeat When was the dawning Ever so glorious? When was the dove’s song Ever so sweet? Spring spatters colors Of pale pink and yellow Wildflowers blooming In meadows of green When were the fields so Fragrant and lovely? When did I notice What never was seen? Love can change feelings Love can change beauty Love makes a life so Full and complete When did I first hear Mourning doves calling? When was a soft kiss Ever so sweet? Elizabeth Santos [This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Elizabeth~ this is just SO beautiful.........*hand on my heart* love this  SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love the way this flows...beautiful write. Poeminister |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Love does open the eyes to such beauty. It's like a whole new world. You've expressed this beautifully. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
Great. Flowing beautiful, and enjoyable reading. it make you smile. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
When was a poem so beautiful? |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
You make me yearn for spring. To hear the birds singing their love songs, then making their nests. |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soft and lovely, Elizabeth!! Very nice!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
It is when you pick up the pen, so to speak, and write about the beauties of life and love. That's when I enjoy the questions of your when and the hidden explanations within the lines........love it! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
THank you all for your responses to this little poem. Love can make everything seem different, can't it.I appreciate your love;y comments Liz |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
When were the fields so Fragrant and lovely? When did I notice What never was seen? Love can change feelings Love can change beauty Love makes a life so Full and complete When did I first hear Mourning doves calling? When was a soft kiss Ever so sweet? ================================= Incredibly lovely, Elizabeth! Love does sharpen our senses (except for common sense *EG*) and waken us to things unseen before. *S* |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Thank you, suthrn, for finding this little poem way in the back. I'm glad you liked it Liz |
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