Open Poetry #12 |
In The Dreaming… a sonnet recited. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
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This chest does hold the beat of loves kind soul; I’ll be the prince of one who sees of me, And vow this truth to you my heart of gold, Oh, show that welcome smile that I do need. I know you search like me, still believing, At least we’ll meet tonight, in the dreaming. ============================ "This chest does hold the beat of loves kind soul; I’ll be the prince of one who sees of me," indeed you do & will P-man...indeed this is excellent parker ... your sonnets are always written with such depth of emotion,sincerety and expression. very well done...the poem and the whole presentation gotta love those sweet tease S's very cool. Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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SEA
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Parker~ "I know you search like me, still believing, At least we’ll meet tonight, in the dreaming." I L O V E this!! So romantic.......*sigh* SEA |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love the ending! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Exceptional sonnet...beautifully done. Poeminister |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Another nice one, Parker. You're going to have all kinds of people dreaming here. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
I know you search like me, still believing, At least we’ll meet tonight, in the dreaming. ------------------------------ very wonderful...from first line to last line..you held my heart... i search like you, still believing..and hope to meet you tonite...in the dreaming... hugs, g "there is no BEST in a world of INDIVIDUALS..." "FORGIVENESS is giving up my right to hurt you for hurting me..." |
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Parker Member Elite
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Janet, thank you sweet friend. I always enjoy your replies. SEA, thank you sexy. Voiceless, thank you very much for your reply. Poeminister, thank you fellow canuck. kcsgrandma, your very kind, life is just a dream isn't it. dg, then my job is done sweets. Parker |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
I really like these Recital poems you do. This is the line of lines... "A joke of life the role of lonely hearts," This is so insightfull so powerful, so...so... Buffy like. I think I had better go back to bed. It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I'm not currently able to hear the recitation, but I did enjoy the read and the last two lines, especially. |
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Denise
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Beautiful, Parker!! I couldn't hear it, even with Windows Media Player but it was surely a feast for the eyes!! Lovely!! Visit my Homepage! http://www.geocities.com/dcorbley/index.html |
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Parker Member Elite
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Marina, how did you know I get all my insight from "Buffy the Vampire Slayer". She rocks... VAS, thank you. Denise, I don't know why that is, try downloading real player it works much better. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Hi Parker, the deeper I dig into your poetry, the better it gets. Love it. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm going to bed now...meet you soon |
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Parker Member Elite
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dee, I just can't hide can I, even downunder. Paula, well then dream sweetly, and I'll whisper a sonnet for you. Parker |
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Dee Member Elite
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Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I don't know what it is, but I had to come back again. Dee I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
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dee, your just teasing me. I'd really love to hear that down under accent read out loud... not that would be a treat. Australion female voice just send me. Parker |
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SEA
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Posts 22676with you |
Parker~ Hey Handsome....just re-reading this treat......ummm, love this one SEA |
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Parker Member Elite
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SEA, always so sweet.... whats a guy to do. Parker |
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CD Member
since 2001-01-27
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Absolutely marvelous. I loved this one!! Very nice. CD |
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