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Open Poetry #12

critical conditons

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

0 posted 2001-02-24 03:45 PM

Before we have our heart attacks
and learn the punch line to life’s joke
perhaps love will find us and strike...

And don’t we both deserve a stroke?

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-24 04:21 PM

that kind yes..many of them *s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-25 02:27 PM

yes!!!!

I love this!! Love the line. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-25 07:05 PM

You never cease to amaze me, NC. Quite the double entendre here. I really enjoyed this, as long as I can pick my stroke and the kind I give.

JLR
Senior Member

since 2001-02-04

Posts 1785

4 posted 2001-02-25 07:14 PM

Do you even know how funny this is? And to both ?'s...mine and yours...YES!

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

5 posted 2001-02-25 09:51 PM

heh heh...thanks everyone!
glad you liked this

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