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Open Poetry #12

With All The Words

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

0 posted 2001-02-24 10:42 AM

With All The Words

With all the words
That spells out lonely
The ones most heard
Are if only
So sad
Lost chance
Almost had
Loves dance

The words of regret
That spells out pain
And upset
Once again
You hear
The sound
Of tears
Sorrow found

With just a sigh
That calls to the night
It seeks to fly
Lost its flight
Break free
Of the fear
Of misery
Hearts tear

With all the time
That is left to you
Seek to shine
Be only true
See light
Banish hate
Be bright
Don’t be late

Marsha

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

1 posted 2001-02-24 10:44 AM

Beautifully, and deftly said...nicely penned.

Poeminister

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2001-02-24 10:45 AM

thank you for the treasure for my library!! Wonderful Mushy, I love this

SEA

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-24 10:50 AM

Beautifully woven. Yes, 'if only' can be the saddest words or even a trap into undue guilt. To break free from that phrase is extremely necessary. Great lamentation ending in sound advice.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

4 posted 2001-02-24 11:10 AM

enjoy the read

Ariana
Senior Member

since 2000-10-08

Posts 571
Orlando, Florida

5 posted 2001-02-25 06:14 PM

Marsha

Your words are sad but beautiful. There are many "if only" times in one's life. I enjoyed the visit.

Ariana

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