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Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2001-02-24 08:50 AM


“Blue Eyes Once More”
by
Bill Charles
~~~~

A poem I wrote once before, about your enchanting blue eyes,
but I forgot to mention,
how seductively, you still have them mesmerized…
I now know that it will never stop, as they have reached my soul,
and I feel them burning inside me,
I’m out of control…

But you do this with love’s caring, gently, yet so uniquely,
and it could only come from someone,
so gracious, like you…
Through those eyes I sense, the tenderness of your innocence,
like a young child that knows,
their mother’s care, and softness …

They are the most charming, and to me also very pristine,
drawing me closer,
something, I would have never foreseen…
And once again they place me, into your magical spell,
as this burning desire that I have,
beckons me to compell…

Piercing blue eyes are searching my mind, hypnotizing me,
and I wonder how this is possible,
the way you do it, so easily…
When I lie with you, I’m so enraptured by their fire,
as they speak to me with their warmth,
and every time I touch you,
it’s me, that they desire…

~~~~




© Copyright 2001 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
nakdthoughts
Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2001-02-24 09:01 AM


your poems are so touching BC and romantic..~S~

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Celeste
Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-24 10:19 AM


A woman loved! I'll echo Wynter's sigh!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
3 posted 2001-02-24 01:47 PM


Sounds like some truly beautiful blue eyes.
And the one who holds those blue eyes is very lucky I might add!

Wonderful, and beautifuly written Bill.


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Ariana
Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571
Orlando, Florida
4 posted 2001-02-25 06:11 PM


Bill

I totally agree with the others, very romantic. You paint a beautiful image.

Ariana

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