when i saw her with another man

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Open Poetry #12

when i saw her with another man

Ixtab
Member

since 1999-06-23

Posts 105
MEXICAlpan de las tunas

0 posted 2001-02-24 05:46 AM

Hate me she pleaded.
Ask for the moon not to phase
for the sun not to rise
for rain not drop
for thunder not to sound
I answered...

And my eyes became water
my knees sustained a dead weight
opression of uselesness
dire heart sadly pumping
my unfelt, thick , blood.

Why did i fly into hell?
a road well cautioned it was
but blind love's guide
is the goddess of insanity

Who could know love
without tasting bitterness?
who could know victory
if fallen ye haven´t.

Hate me she pleaded

So I Will

Let the moon be always full
night be eternal
rain shoot to the sky
thunder be mute.
our love die.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-24 09:13 AM

so beautifully written, I shall save this to read again and maybe...be inspired to respond in poem...

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

2 posted 2001-02-24 10:21 AM

This touched me deeply. A place I have been once too many times.

Your writing is excellent, powerful emotion. I compliment you!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

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