Open Poetry #12 |
The Empath is now silent |
DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Quiet again are the paths that lead To those that have the greater need I see no future nor see I the past My life is mine but not even that will last Soon I run to she that wants me again She sees all that I have ever been As the finest prize on a carnival midway Her outlook as fresh as new dawned day My curse is as others must be I must hurt the ones I cannot see I hurt the more because of your tear In my heart I hold eternally dear The love you offered pure and true From first you typed "I love you |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
don......you ARE the finest prize......if any woman doesnt think so they are nuts.......love ya buddy...helen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
from one Empath to another. . . this is the life that we must lead. . . we are called, and chosen. . . but we know the heart, and we know the soul. . . and one will come. . . to show us ourselves. . . superb words, excellent writing. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
I love the way you wrote it! what a great poem! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
this was gentle and sweet, and very apparent that it was written by a true empath---loved this much. |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
The empathy in you has touched the sympathy in me. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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