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M. Auguste
Junior Member

since 2001-02-24

Posts 10

0 posted 2001-02-24 12:37 PM

Sunset Hair

by Michael Auguste

Each day he wakes to love's caress.
Is cherished by a heart so pure.
Now that her hand does reach for his,
life seems more easy to endure.

Her skin of silk and sunset hair
do mesmerize this man of art.
He bathes within her warm embrace
and never does he want to part.

That hearts can touch and both alight,
exites him so when they do kiss.
Their passion pushes back the dark.
Oh how he's longed to know such bliss.

As candles spill their amber glow,
upon her face, he seeks her eyes.
Then he, her moistened lips explore,
while from them both escape soft cries.

Such beauty has he rarely known
and peace of mind to fill his days.
What depth of caring that has grown.
He loves her in so many ways.

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

1 posted 2001-02-24 09:52 AM

As candles spill their amber glow,
upon her face, he seeks her eyes.

another beauty..~sighing

~wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2001-02-24 03:06 PM

Mmm, I love this flow, and the feeling is romantic and beautiful. My favorite style, also, the feel is lyrical and precise at once.
Sandra

M. Auguste
Junior Member

since 2001-02-24

Posts 10

3 posted 2001-02-24 03:36 PM

Wynter,

Thank you once again. You're very kind.

Michael

Hi Sandra,

It's been a long time and it's so good to see you. I appreciate your generous words on this piece. I'll try to drop by more often and do some reading here. It's nice to be among friends. You've all made me feel so welcome on this visit. Thank you.

Michael

suthern

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since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2001-02-27 03:44 PM

I like this... very romantic!! Well done!

Dee
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

5 posted 2001-02-27 03:52 PM

Michael it's so good to see you back here. I really enjoy reading your work.
Take care,
Love Dee

I wish you every happiness and may you always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

6 posted 2001-02-27 03:54 PM

Softly wonderful....

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

7 posted 2001-02-27 04:10 PM

Beautiful write. Enjoyed this very much.

Poeminister

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

8 posted 2001-02-27 05:08 PM

suthern,

Thank you. A lot of my poetry is romantic. You're welcome to visit my web site, if you'd like to read more of my work. I appreciate you stopping by and reading this.

Michael

Hi Dee,

Just a visit. I don't have as much time as I'd like these days. I'm involved with three other forums at the present time. I am glad you liked this one. I hope to talk with you soon. Take care, my dear friend.

Love,
Michael

Sunshine,

So nice to see you. :-) It's been a long time. Thank you for the "softly wonderful." You're very sweet.

Michael

Poeminister,

I haven't seen you here before. It's always good to see new faces here. You're in a place with a great group of people. I know that you'll like it here. Thank for reading and I'm happy you enjoyed my poem.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Bec
Member

since 2001-02-23

Posts 475
Canberra

9 posted 2001-03-02 11:18 PM

Michael, you have such a wonderful way with words. I hope I can learn so much from this wonderful group of people.
Bec

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-03-02 11:23 PM

wow...........this is one of the most romantic poems I've ever read.........beautiful!!

SEA

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

11 posted 2001-03-02 11:38 PM

Bec,

Hi there. It's so nice to see you here. Yes, you'll learn a lot from the folks here. You will also make some good friends. I hope to talk to you soon. In the meantime, ((((hugs)))) to you and your wonderful family.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

12 posted 2001-03-02 11:42 PM

SEA,

Better watch it, or you're going to have me blushing. Seriously thank you very much. You're so kind to say this.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

13 posted 2001-03-03 06:23 AM

Michael~
You write was almost every woman longs to
have whispered in her ear...and felt within
her heart. Such beautiful golden weaving~

Lady In White

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since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

14 posted 2001-03-03 08:23 AM

Pointedly passionate....

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

15 posted 2001-03-03 11:09 AM

Michael--Yes, I think every woman dreams to be loved like this...Your artistry with words shines in this softly sensual poem...

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

16 posted 2001-03-03 02:25 PM

Butterflies,

And every woman should have these things whispered to her. I'm glad you found pleasure in this one. Thank you.

Michael

Lady In White,

I appreciate you taking the time to read this. Thank you.

Michael

Martie,

It's good to see you here. I'm glad you enjoyed this. Sensual? Perhaps a little, I suppose. Thank you for the nice comments, my friend.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

17 posted 2001-03-04 07:14 PM

this is lovely, your passion for writing shows...be well...

Greeneyes~

***

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

Auguste

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since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

18 posted 2001-03-04 07:28 PM

Greeneyes,

Thank you. I don't really see myself writing anymore romantic poetry. These days my poetry doesn't seem to have much direction. I find my words stumbling and not knowing where to go. Again, thank you.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

19 posted 2001-03-04 07:30 PM

The flow of it just sucks you in!

~*Peachy Be*~

Auguste

Member Elite

since 2000-02-16

Posts 3953
By the sea

20 posted 2001-03-04 07:43 PM

Voiceless,

I'm glad you liked this. I haven't written a romantic poem in several weeks. My inspiration has left me. Any romantic poems I post in the future will have to be some of my old work, I'm afraid. Right now it's hard to even find a reason to write. My muse is gone.

Michael

Proust-
"Love is space and time measured by the heart"

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