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AngelInBound New Member
since 2000-04-19
Posts 3 |
Like a lightning strike flashed my past with the pounding rain came my tears the storm's fiery described my thoughts and blackout's surged my greatest fears A loud crack, there went my heart a shrivelled casing left to die then came the evil helped me thru Showed me drugs i began to try Watched my life fall apart though evil made it look just fine reality knows addictions have hold and slowly destroys this life of mine Wind so wild it's ander shows all love lost just blown away no peace, no joy, no hope in sight will doneday full, die where i lay All so hopeless, so close to gone the future ahead now only black the storm so strong and i so weak can only cry as i look back. By K Austin (c) |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Oh my...this piece hold much power and sadness at the same time. I have a friend who's daughter is an addict and is in constant battle of using and not using. Thank you for sharing such a piercing piece with us. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, what a powerful poem...I hope that you can break away from drugs...I can only imagine how hard it would be to break...just keep trying and never give-up hope cause, anything can happen.....great write! Nathan |
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