Open Poetry #12 |
Only for Tonight |
JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Only for Tonight It seems the night To lay it all on the line What do I really have to lose? I love you I still want you Say one word I will come back to you. But only for tonight. Tomorrow, I come back to my senses. Think fast There isn’t much time I’m caught up in the emotion. We both know this won’t last I’m much too protective of my sanity. I still love you. Can you hear me? If you’re listening to my ravings Please…just acknowledge me. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm here...do I count? This is a feeling I know well...the unwillingness to let go in the cold hours before the dawn...HUGS |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
You crack me up! And yes you certainly count...but so sorry, if you notice the time of your response...after midnight. Ha! Thanks for reading. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Lord do I know that feeling and how caught up in the emotion we can get!!!!! You've captured that completely. Beautifully done. "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I understand this ..........very well done SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
POWERFUL plea here! Well done JLR! |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
very nice although, it might work better if ya gave it to her! haha |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JLR, I guess my question is...you had time to write this while you were in the midst of ...."the mist"....? I so enjoyed...thank you...{~,^} |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
nice write.... we are never protected from our own mind. Parker |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I know this feeling all to well. I would give anything to relive one more night. Good Work my freind! keep it up! As Always, Laura |
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