Open Poetry #12 |
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Only for Tonight |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Only for Tonight It seems the night To lay it all on the line What do I really have to lose? I love you I still want you Say one word I will come back to you. But only for tonight. Tomorrow, I come back to my senses. Think fast There isn’t much time I’m caught up in the emotion. We both know this won’t last I’m much too protective of my sanity. I still love you. Can you hear me? If you’re listening to my ravings Please…just acknowledge me. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I'm here...do I count? This is a feeling I know well...the unwillingness to let go in the cold hours before the dawn...HUGS |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
You crack me up! And yes you certainly count...but so sorry, if you notice the time of your response...after midnight. Ha! Thanks for reading. |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Lord do I know that feeling and how caught up in the emotion we can get!!!!! You've captured that completely. Beautifully done. ![]() "The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new. Socrates |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I understand this ..........very well done ![]() |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
POWERFUL plea here! Well done JLR! |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
very nice although, it might work better if ya gave it to her! haha |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
JLR, I guess my question is...you had time to write this while you were in the midst of ...."the mist"....? I so enjoyed...thank you...{~,^} |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
nice write.... we are never protected from our own mind. ![]() Parker |
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ParisGrl Senior Member
since 2000-06-01
Posts 610 |
R.J. I know this feeling all to well. I would give anything to relive one more night. Good Work my freind! keep it up! As Always, Laura |
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