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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I am so many things If you only knew You'd see the real me And know all I can be I am kind, gentle, caring, Loving, trustworthy, honorable, Intelligent, loyal, sincere, Patient, creative, sensitive, I am an artist, a poet, A musician at heart, Dependable, responsible, And a true friend Once I let you in my heart You are there for life Because you hold A special place to me There is so much good Harbored in my soul My faith will see me through To the future I await It will be better Than the times past Because for tomorrow I live today at last Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ positive yuh i like |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
L dubya~ Wonderful......this is so wonderful........add talented  SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lone Wolf, Beautifully said... Poeminister |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW~ loved this. and thru getting to know you thru your poetry yes my friend...you are all these things and more. wonderful write!! take care amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
As Amy has said, you are all this and more! Take care! "I've done all the dumb things"....Paul Kelly |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful Lone Wolf....I have every reason in the world to believe that you are all those things and that you are a friend for life....this is a great write!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
everyone knows this is YOU.. you are all of these things and more and a beautiful lady in every way!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Well delineated album of the self. The phrase more than the sum of these things comes to mind. Well said AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
walt . . . Thank you, and yes I'm trying to be positive these days. SEA . . . Well, thank you. I just write what I feel. Glad you enjoyed it. Poeminister . . . Thanks. Amy . . . Happy you like this one. Just looking at the good for a change. For some reason we usually focus on the negatives and life's just too short for that! Eagle . . . Nice to see you my friend. Thank you and YOU take care too. ethome . . . That I am. Thanks! Kathleen . . . If they know me they do! Thanks for the compliments, but YOU are also beautiful in every way my friend. AT . . . Thank you. Just a peek at the real me. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 02-24-2001).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
this is wonderful..I felt like you were describing the me I don't have the nerve to huggzz ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
I loved this Lone Wolf! A wonderful self-portrayal ... positive, uplifting and something to share with oneself on days where we need a boost, really enjoyed this! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Just A Woman Senior Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 507 |
Finding yourself, and who you are is so rarely done. You've done it beautifully. I am so glad I caught this. After years of searching, I have found I am nothing more, nothing less...I am in truth Just A Woman after all. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Its wonderful that we can see our true selves and love it. Thanks for sharing, well done! |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
My but I wish I had the ability to see myself as you do! You have been very kind to me since I arrived at the site, so I have to agree with those that know you well, you must truly be all of these things and I am sure more. Nicely done. ~*~A poet is someone who reads more than they write ~*~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Wynter . . . I bet they are there in you too. Just look and see. Kit . . . Yes, I try to remember those things when life is not so kind to me. Thanks! Just A Woman . . . Thank you, yes, I finally know who I am. You know, I'm not so bad after all!! walker . . . It sure is wonderful. That key also unlocks the door to inner peace. Hard to achieve, but well worth the effort. Mysteria . . . Just look in the mirror. i am thinking it is there from what I have seen so far. Thank you, I am happy to help you anytime and I am glad we met. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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