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One is the Sun (1000th)
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One is the Sun (1000th) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
 One is the Sun One is the Sun with illumination beside another in sweetest union One is the Sun of one's own religion by choices, deeds in determination One is the Sun that has always been and will always be; what never begun One is the Sun made with many a one [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-25-2001).] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
One is the poet with what he writes, and what you wrote was wonderfully done. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
One is the sun heating her heart showering her in light reminding her of love........lost ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Always, you inspire....... Beautiful PM......  SEA |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Voiceless and SEA- Thank you both for your comments. Glad you liked this. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
First, kind poet, congratulations on your 1000th post....just think....1000 gestures of goodwill, kindness, and lovely, lovely poetry... and now.... to live to love One One to hold be held One One to touch be touched One One to lift to soar One One for One One to sing sun songs One One to warm like warm Sun One Sun to shine be mine One as said before me, you inspire, and you do it very, very well... |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Congrats on the milestone (look in Announcements!)....and this is a beautiful way to celebrate it. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Poeminister, Well done enjoyed the read. |
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NC Member
since 2001-02-20
Posts 89 |
congrats on the 1000th! well done poem enjoyed the read |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
One is the Sun that has always been and will always be; what never begun ================= Congrats on your milestone post PM ... and thank you for the many kind replies to my work that are a part of the 1000th love the rhyme scheme of this. well done poet sir Strange ... the desire for certain pleasures is a part of my pain. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Sunshine- Thank you always for your kind comments and encouragement. Elizabeth-- Thank you. I love celebrations Sy- A pleasure to hear from you, thank you. NC-- Thanks for stopping by. Janet--Your words are always uplifting...thank you take care, Poeminister [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-26-2001).] |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
You, Poeminister, are one talented poet. This was beautiful as the sun itself. Congratulations on your 1000th post!! I hop there are many more. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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